Spring . . . reminds me of warmer weather
Warmer weather . . . reminds me of nature’s change
Nature’s change . . . reminds me of fresh starts
Fresh starts . . . remind me of new beginnings
New beginnings . . . remind me of early spring flowers
Early spring flowers . . . remind me of firsts
Firsts . . . remind me of opportunities
Opportunities . . . remind me of doors open
Doors open . . . remind me of endless possibilities
Endless possibilities . . . remind me of our youth
Our youth . . . reminds me of changes . . .
Which reminds me of those early flowers that let us know it’s spring!
I really like the way you wrote this slice - with the ...reminds (I'm sure there's a name for that) and how you started and ended with Spring. Thanks for reminding me what spring is all about!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful connections. It would be cool to see this poem in an actual "shape" poem format - maybe a spiral or actual circle. Thanks for sharing this post.
ReplyDeleteYour words make me rejoice that spring is indeed here. They also make me think of how we can find new growth in our lives as well as in nature. This has been my first time to participate in the Slice of Life Challenge, and it has already helped me grow and change in many ways. Thanks for sharing your poem. I am inspired to try this form sometime myself!
ReplyDeleteI really love your circle poem, and spring is the best time to think about new beginnings and trying something new. You continue to inspire, Lynn!
ReplyDeleteAnd the circle goes round and round. Very cool form!
ReplyDeleteVery cool...makes me want to try this form out! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteIf you did a wordle with this you would get "remind" right in the center and all those other beautiful things
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